This is in response to Taylor’s Calisthenics. This is a great
example of using the steps in dialogue that we discussed in class. The way the
characters seem to carry on two different conversations, but are only having one
is very true to conversations in real life. My only suggestion for this work is
to make a stronger connection between Jackie’s last statement, and the main
character’s line before that.
For example: “But you didn’t hear that from me,”
Jackie pleaded “Oh my god. Have you seen my wardrobe on Pintrest? I have this
really cute pair of midnight blueberry shoes on there”.
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