Classmate Response Week 10, Response 1

This is in response to Morgan’s Free entry. This piece upon first reading it reminded me of a spoken word piece. The way the lines are structured gives it the meter of a poem that should be performed. For me I feel that last two lines could be omitted. The piece would have added strength if it ended earlier. Like we’ve discussed in class it’s not important to tie up everything neatly at the end of a piece. While there is room to make some of the abstractions more concrete I feel that in this instance the abstractions give the poem a sense of magnitude.